One example I can think of is my football career. I played for 7 years and every year I can say I learned a new technique. For instance, my first few years I learned how the basics. How to tackle, the simple rules, what to do when on the field. As the years went on I learned more and more. I learned to block and do more moves for my position. I learned more defensive moves and was able to continue to learn more precise skills. I also learned life lessons too. I learned to listen to coaches, and listen to authority. I also learned to not say no and to never stop making changes. Once I got to high school, I learned much more precise moves. I learned quick steps and pull blocks. I learned to use my hands more and I learned more complex plays. As the years went on I grew up and learned more about hard work. This relates exactly to the revision process. In middle school, you learn the basics of writing essays. You then build on your learning. In high school, you learn more aspects of writing. Finally by college, you work on finely honing your skills and building on what you’ve learned your entire life. This also is an example revisions on just one paper. You start by making a raw paper and then add more and more in order to finely hone your paper. You make revision until you are happy with your product or in football, happy with your performance. Just like football and writing, you never stop making more improvements.
