TRIAC Counter Claim

People can use this in business or just general texting. Some argue that this causes more distraction. Technology allows for hours on hours of distraction but it can be controlled.  If an individual has enough control to stop themselves from talking in a situation then the distraction can be handled or avoided. For example, the … [Read more…]

Revision Statement Essay 2

The first thing I am going to do when revising my paper is look at quotes. First off, I will look to introduce my authors into my piece. I will add general summaries for King, Restak, and Anderson into my introduction paragraph. I need to rearrange my first evidence paragraph. The paragraph talks too much … [Read more…]

Sammi Draft Comments

Prompt 2 First Draft Sammi Roche Sammi Roche ENG 110 H6 10/15/17 Prompt 2 First Draft         In a world where there is so much going on constantly, it is no surprise that everyone gets distracted so easily. For instance, while writing this, I’m watching a show on Netflix while texting my friends. With all … [Read more…]

Sara Draft Comments

prompt 2 rough draft eng 110 Sara Tancredi 2 Sara Tancredi Eng 110 H6 10/11/17   Prompt 2 Draft Imagine this: you are doing your homework, when suddenly, your phone buzzes. The familiar sound immediately triggers an intense need to stop what you are doing and pick up your phone. Your mind begins to race … [Read more…]

First Blog Post

My first experiences with the website is that it is kind of confusing but as I get more comfortable with it, it will get easier and less confusing. The dashboard feature is very convenient and is able to make managing the site much easier. The photo uploading tool is also very easy to use. Creating … [Read more…]

My Learning Log

This paper was the first time my revision process was actually a genuine part of my paper writing experience. I never really changed that much as a writer in my old work. I would always focus a lot on my rough draft and try and perfect it into a final draft on my first try … [Read more…]

First Draft Entry Prompt

Mike Steminsky ENG 110 Emerson   The purpose of higher education is to challenge and push the youth of America to progress the nation into a more prideful or efficient era. Many college students will tell you that high school was not difficult for them. They will say they did not put much time into … [Read more…]

About Me

I am a first year nursing student at the University of New England. In my free time I enjoy hanging out with friends, studying, and going to the gym. My hobbies include sports, playing video games, and going on hikes. My favorite place to study is the silent section of the library. It is very … [Read more…]

Outline Draft

Thesis: The wealth of constant information strengthens young minds because it allows for earlier thinking, accurate precise information, and easy convenient accessibility.   Claim 1: Constant information strengthens thinking at an earlier age I’m going to talk about how having information at an earlier age can improve the education of our youth. Many of our … [Read more…]